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In These Halls by ~Sedjmier:iconSedjmier:



Deep in the pit of the hollowed heart,
Where sorrow gains the first foothold;
Lie too the seeds of beauty waiting.

Upon the rising of the lonely moon,
Beneath an expanse of endless stars;
Sweetest nectar rains from the heavens.

Return to the days of the bygone past,
Before arrived a looming side so dour;
When first a radiance came shining.

Within the halls of the nurtured soul,
Grows tall a silver-blossomed tree;
Petals shimmering with untold mirth.

From the hallowed lands known as life,
Come true the tales of the singing boy;
With streaming tears at beauty’s sight.

Filled with nectar shoots sprout forth,
Strengthened with a simple shining care;
Comfort from this gentlest of melodies.

As the once hollowed heart fills within,
Shedding all darkly gathered lament;
A blossom reveals all new found love.
©2004-2009 ~Sedjmier
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Author's Comments

From within my being it was born, through my typing hands it was given life, and here it lies in adulthood, ready and waiting to be explored, this child of poetics known as a poem. I'm happy, go figure.

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:iconbitanathofgad:
Ooooh! This gave me goosebumps. :clap: :clap: :clap: I know this will sound stupid, but I understand it on some fundamental level without being able to express it in words. :happycry: Maybe not so stupid after all. That's what poetry should do for you! :rose: :rose: :rose:

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~bitan

Currently living on the dark side of the moon.
:iconsedjmier:
I'm glad you like it so. And thanks for the fav, means a lot to me.

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Laususa

Emotions are training wheels for greatness, someday you have to cast them aside.
:iconmacflora:
Really, really, really good!!!! I love this one. It's so beautiful, real and otherworldly all at the same time. That's a major fave!

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Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in always rising every time we fall.
Confucius
:iconsedjmier:
Woohoo

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Laususa

Emotions are training wheels for greatness, someday you have to cast them aside.
:iconmacflora:
:) Glad that made you happy! And you're really, really welcome!

--
Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in always rising every time we fall.
Confucius

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